The Dog Walker Sample

UnknownDialogue is easy to write but great dialogue… now that’s a whole new ball game.  I’m searching for a way to make each character distinctive, have a voice of their own but, at the same time, be true, relevant and believable.  I want the reader to dote on every word each character speaks.  Moreover,  I want the audience to go home with the memory of what was said.  I want them to repeat what was said.  For that to happen they have to feel what was said.